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Yup! It's finally here!
Page 1 of Forgotten's chapter 2. This is actually the first time I've gotten to chapter 2 of any comic I've created 
Kinda weird, I have to say
I know, not a lotta words...but that's because a scene like this doesn't need em. And in case you didn't notice the black gutters, yes, this is still Naruto's flashback/retelling of what happened on their mission
Page 2 will be out sometime...but not until I can catch up on a few other things first.
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Yup! It's finally here!
Page 1 of Forgotten's chapter 2. This is actually the first time I've gotten to chapter 2 of any comic I've created Kinda weird, I have to sayI know, not a lotta words...but that's because a scene like this doesn't need em. And in case you didn't notice the black gutters, yes, this is still Naruto's flashback/retelling of what happened on their mission
Page 2 will be out sometime...but not until I can catch up on a few other things first.
Image size
1684x2188px 2.01 MB
Make
HP
Model
HP Scanjet djf4100
Date Taken
May 28, 2009, 12:10:13 AM
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